It will be about a man who’s torn in half

Hi Robert,

I have completed a first draft of my first full-length play. I have done two quick table readings with other actors reading multiple parts and I think it scans well.

I intend to sit on the script for at least a week and do nothing with it. The week after that, I intend to rewrite the problematic scenes. After that I will give you a couple copies.

The script that I pass to you will not be the script that we produce. The next step for me will be a private, friends-only reading, at my house in San Bruno, most likely some time in August. There will be another rewrite after that.

The script checks in at 83 pages and is currently cut into 3 acts. Once I see how it plays during a full table reading, I may recut it into two acts.

It?s good. I want to make it better.

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